It is undoubted that everybody likes travel abroad, because it not only can let people feel relax but also learn other country's culture. As everyone knows that travel can be separated in two ways, first is tour travel and second is backpack travel. This two ways have several similarities but a great of differences.
The similarities are that both of them can let people feel relax and realize other country's culture. No matter which way you choose, you need to pay lot of money on it.
Despite these similarities, they are still have great differences in many aspects. First, backpacking need to realize lots of information about the place which they want to go, because you need to know which hotel you will live in and which traffic tools you will need. But tour traveler don't, they just need to follow the tourist guide's direction only. Second, backpacking are not limited by time and place, they can go anywhere in anytime if they want. But tour traveler can't, they need to follow the schedule, generally, their time is very tight. Third, backpacking need to well realize the country's language which they want to go, otherwise, they will encounter many problems. But tour traveler don't have this problem, because their tourist guide will handle everything for them.
To sum up, both of them have advantage and disadvantage. Choosing a way you prefer is the most important thing to us.
Joe, I'm glad you handed in your homework eventually. :)
回覆刪除The comparison-contrast block organization in your work is quite clear. In particular, you also provided a detailed contrasting paragraph. However, it is a pity that, compared to the contrast paragraph, the second paragraph (comparison paragraph) seemed to be short in length. You may like to enlarge paragraph 2 if possible.
Here are some mistakes I would like you to take a look at. These mistakes are adopted from this journal.
1. Do you still remember the 'not only but also' grammar and the rule of parallelism that you learned last Friday? Review what you have learned and fix the following clause 'because it not only can let people feel relax but also learn other country's culture.'
2. The clause in your topic sentence in paragraph 3 contains a few mistakes: 'they are still have great differences in many area' Try to fix them, please.
3. 'Obey' here is not so appropriate (line 5, paragraph 3). It is better to use 'follow' in that sentence.