2010年4月1日 星期四

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The saying goes：The camera never lies. But after looking those photos, I can only say those people who say so are definitely wrong. Well, all thanks to technology, it not only brings a more convenient life to people but also changes some original believes. With it, we can turn an old lady into a stunner woman or make someone look more slender than before on photos. Is it really a good thing? Well, I know everyone loves beauty and want to be perfect when other one looks at their photos, but some people may feel that they are deceived, at least I think so. I don’t like someone modifies his/her pictures because it doesn’t true, those pictures just cheat himself and other people, it can bring some problem as well, for example: if you met a girl on the internet and she is pretty on the photo, but when you met each other in person, you found that she was quit different from picture, well, that will be a embarrassing moment.
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  1. Ming Huei (John) Lin2010年5月4日 清晨6:30

    Hi Joe,

    It is really good to see how you relate this journal to our daily life. You indeed did some thinking here. Well done! I also like the example you give at the end. The sentence that "it...changes some believes" (line 4) is very a nice touch!

    Yet, some mistakes need your help here:

    1. There is a saying goes本句文法動詞的部分請再做檢查。

    2. After looking those photos, I can only say they are definitely wrong. 這個wrong...意思不何這邊的文意, 請再挑一個適合的。

    3. Well, all thanks for technology, it not only bring a more convenient life to people but also change some original believes. 這一句有三個地方需要修正:
    第一，thanks for 還是thanks to?
    第二，all thanks for technology感覺是個sentence fragment，請改成句子會好些。
    第三，not only...but also用得不錯，但是只詞是it，所以動詞要做什麼修改?

    4. because it doesn't true 的doesn't請改掉

    5. 最後embarrassed 跟embarrassing的差別

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